Half Wise, Half Blind

Odin

These 33 word entries are kind of addicting. This week’s challenge is to write about love lost, without using any of the following words:

love
sad
tears
wept
heart
pain
I took a mythological approach.

Your fiery hair and wicked smile enthralled me. Our blood flowed as one, till you spilled it onto the frost. The day your child’s teeth are at my throat shall be our reckoning.

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15 thoughts on “Half Wise, Half Blind

  1. KymmInBarcelona says:

    Whoa! Way wrong! Oops just don’t cut it here.

  2. Very cool. I really liked this one!

  3. C.C. says:

    I also took a mythological approach. Lots of fun. Enjoyed yours 🙂

  4. This is fantastically chilling. I LOVE that last line. Nice one!

  5. Draug419 says:

    Cool tilt to a love story!

  6. Christine says:

    Niiiiice! Gave me chills. I love that you fit something like an epic into 33 words. (And on another note, I love your blog name.)

  7. atrm61 says:

    Yikes!How terrifying!

  8. Awesome. Red-headed vampires. Thanks for linking up.

  9. Momo says:

    This is awesome – you packed so much into these 33. Well done!

  10. My sincere apologies for having failed to express my admiration when I came across this piece the first time! That’s really cool 🙂

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